There's something missing...
As always, great art, an excellent sense of atmosphere and you have the comic book style down pat. However, one thing this series needs is a basic understanding of animation. I thought at first the animation was a little lacking because perhaps you were going for more of a lesser animated featurette to compliment the comic book aesthetic. This movie however has attempts at heavily animated scenes that fall really short of the bar.
A higher framerate would be nice and a lot more flexibility in the characters would ease it up enough so that the animation is at least digestable.